Title Update #2

Hey,

It’s me. Well this is gonna be a short update on some of my stuff. Hope you don’t read three lines of this and then waltz off.

Deliver Hope, is gonna be over by early October. Ugh, I’m really flushed out of ideas here man. If I don’t get any ideas, I won’t finish this small series on time. I’m really not planning on making a sequel for this series though. A sequel is kinda boring you know. At first I thought of continuing it, until I saw how retarded my writing is, I decided not to.

I’m currently straining myself for graduating exams right now. Yeah me, straining myself for exams, what a ludicrous thought. No, I actually do care about this kind of stuff, only because my parents keep bugging me about it and all my teachers. I don’t plan to be successful to be honest. I just want to do the things I enjoy and at the same time support both me and my family. Who wants to wake up everyday and go do a job that they really hate. I guess that there are many people out there who are having these problems, doing things that they don’t want but then have too because they can’t earn a living without it. I don’t want to be like those people and so do you.

Future projects, well like I said, we’re still in the building process. Still fighting over about how the story will start and how it’ll end. It’s kind of difficult when there’s only 3 people working on it. I know people are thinking, that a small group of people can agree on things more easily. But no, we are not just people, we are people who want others to read this amazing/incredible story that we made. If you want to know who’s in this group, well it’s me(Farid), Zul and Hariz. I know we are not the kind of people, “destined for AWESOME-NESS!” but we just want to make this story just for the sake of fun and maybe let others think that we’re not just hooligans, you know?

Well thanks for reading this Update up till here, really appreciate it. Hope you look forward to my/our future endeavours.

Thanks,

Farid.

Title Update #1.

Hey,

Farid here. Just a little update on my current project/s. so Chapter 2 Part 2 of my series Deliver Hope will be delayed for a few weeks. Why? Because I’m thinking of new ways to write my stories and yes that will also lead me to reading more books. To be honest, I hate reading. Although it helps you improve your strength in English and your knowledge of understanding, I still don’t like doing it, not on a daily basis. The only books that I read, are ones which have drawings or pictures, like a comic or something like that. But I’ll gather up all my strength to read books or news papers.

If you’re asking “ Farid, how long is the series going to be? Is it going to be like harry potter or twilight?”. It’s only going to be 5 chapters, and in some of the chapters there are going to have 2 parts. You know, fuck harry potter and twilight! I hate stories which have slow story line but I like harry potter for its stunning adventure and side quest, you know. Twilight on the other hand, is crap! It’s like you’re reading a very long love letter and the longer you read it, you start to get bored of it. Not bashing on such “GREAT” novels, but I just hate how the story is so slow paced! I know a lot of action is not good but a lot of talking isn’t good either. You’re probably thinking “Farid, you’re such an asshole you know that! Bashing on great shit! Your work does not compare to what they have done! YOU SUCK BIG HAIRY BALLS!”. Hey I did not say anything about my work being as good as theirs, but I did say that I was proud how it turned out to be. Besides those kinds of books are for avid readers, which I am not.

So my future project, still untitled is still in production. We only have a team of 3 people and if you want to join our nameless team or give us suggestion, please do. It’s a story about a man/child venturing into forbidden land to find the killer of his parents and at the same time gather memories of his broken past. After he meets the killer, he then fight him to the death. After the battle, he has a choice whether to spare him or kill him. After doing one of those, he then returned to his village as a hero/villain. It is set in the past, probably the castle age period? I don’t know. But its in a fictional land where monsters and humans live in the same land, not that there are no monsters right now in this era.

Other than a second series, I’m also doing digital ART! Yay! But this will only happen after I buy a scanner or a drawing tablet, for which I’ve been wanting for so long! I’m thinking of doing a web comic, since I have tons of stupid retarded ideas to draw and write about, so why not? And it’ll also make me draw art way easier, no need to sharpen my pencil every now and then, and I’ll also be rid of eraser dust. I’ll probably be getting this after my N levels and when I get a job. And I know a lot of you guys are flushing me with comments saying “ go get a job now you fucking loser!”. Well fuck you, I’m not one to take a job this early, I’m no fucktard. Besides, I’m taking a job just for the sake of buying things that might benefit me or other people. unlike most of you young workers out there working their ass off thinking that they would be a fucking millionaire in just a year or so(people who are taking jobs to support their family or having financial crisis, do not be offended. I’m not talking about you). I bet you’re spending your earnings on stupid stuff such as a freaking whore, so you can get your sorry ass laid. fucking loser or you’ll just show off your god damn money in front of everyone making yourself look like a douche.

Well this is taking too long, sorry. Perhaps next update won’t be so long, you dig? Sorry if I offended any douche bags out there, but you deserved it…..

Thanks,

Farid.

Deliver Hope, Chapter 2: Quid Pro Quo, Part 1

Chapter 2: Quid Pro Quo

Part 1

As the two carriers drove away from the battlefield, more and more enemy reinforcements came in. they shot the carriers with their guns, knowing it would not slow them down, not one bit. Then one of the worshipers just stand in the carriers way a few kilometres from where they are. he had a Rocket Propelled Grenade launcher and he was ready to shoot one of the carriers. The carrier is also not a speed and agile vehicle as it is heavily armoured. Even though the carrier is heavily armoured, it is not strong enough to withstand a blast of that calibre. It would kill everyone in the carrier.

Sergeant buck:” son of a gun! This baby won’t be able to handle a blast from that RPG!”

Driver:” I know! Do something about that guy!”

Then suddenly prophet open up the rear cargo door and jumped out of the carrier. Corporal hady, who was with him was in shocked that he did that.

Corporal hady:” dude! What the fuck are you doing?!” he shouted.

Prophet:” taking out the road block.”

Prophet then picked up a gun just right beside him. He then looked through the crosshair and directed it to the enemy’s head. And when he pulled that trigger, the enemy fell drop dead. Both the driver and sergeant were surprised to see what happened to the guy.

Driver:” what the hell happened to that guy?”

Sergeant buck:” how should I know!”

Then corporal hady used his radio to contact the sergeant and he said.

Corporal hady:” sir, its prophet.”

Sergeant buck:” what? What did you say? Prophet?”

Corporal hady:” yes sir! He jumped out of the cargo we were in and took that guy out for us.”

Sergeant buck:” understood”

After that the corporal turned off his radio and sat down, praying that prophet does not die there. Mean while, the sergeant directed his attention to the driver.

Sergeant buck:” GO BACK!”

Driver:” what sir? Go back? Why?”

Sergeant buck:” one of our men is there!”

Driver:” sorry sir, I can’t risk going back and get into that situation again! Hope you’ll understand.”

Sergeant buck:” bu-”

Driver:” we can come back for him later, after we reached the base.” He interrupted.

Sergeant buck:” we’ll come back for you, son….” He whispered to himself.

And then both carriers fled the battle field, leaving prophet behind. prophet knew that he’s not going to survive long if he stayed here, so he then fled to a city nearby. While running to the city, he was shot everywhere, but it did not have any effect as he was wearing an armour. After a few minutes of running and being shot, he reached the city and managed to escape the fire. Prophet then walked inside an office building which was abandoned for a long time. The glass window was all broken and shattered. There were gun shots on the walls as prophet walked in the building, flickering lights and dangling light bulbs in the ceiling made the whole place looked like a horror movie. Tables and chairs were everywhere, flipped, broken and thrown from the looks of it. Prophet then went in a small room and sat down with the doors closed. It was pitch black and you couldn’t see a thing but prophet could. He’s visor enables him to see in any environment in any condition.

Meanwhile, both buck and hady had reached their destination.

After alighting the carriers, both the sergeant and corporal went to the infirmary to get themselves patched up. While in the infirmary, the sergeant looked as if he was worried.

Corporal hady:” sir, you okay?”

Sergeant buck:” yeah, its just prophet. I can’t believe we left him there.”

Corporal hady:” don’t worry sir, I know he’ll be fine.”

Sergeant buck:” what makes you so sure?”

Corporal hady:” come on, look at the guy! He fell out of a sky and lived! There’s no way a few worshipers can kill him.”

Sergeant buck:” hah! I thought you didn’t believe in him….”

Corporal hady:” well at first I didn’t but when I saw him jumped out of the carrier and shot that guy down, i just felt that he is our final hope.”

Sergeant buck:” hmmph enough sad stories, if we want to save him, we gotta talk to the higher ups! You with me?!” the sergeant stood up and walked out to the hallway.

Corporal being so motivated, stood up and followed his sergeant.

Corporal hady:” SIR YES, SIR!” he replied with a stern face.

As they were walking, someone blocked their way. The sergeant being serious asked the soldier to get out of their way, as they were in a hurry.

Corporal hady:” woah! Look, it’s a chick!”

Sergeant buck:” that’s not the point corporal.” He said to hady.

The sergeant then directed his attention to the female soldier.

Sergeant buck:” get out of our way, soldier!”

soldier:” sorry sir but I can’t do that.”

Sergeant buck:” what’s your name soldier?”

Soldier:” private eve, sir”

Sergeant buck:” well private, if you don’t want to be stripped off your rank, I suggest you get out of our way.”

“that won’t be necessary sergeant.” A voice came behind both the sergeant and the corporal.

Sergeant buck:” general jones!” said the sergeant with a surprised face.

General jones:” so where’s that super soldier you were talking about?” the general asked the sergeant.

Corporal hady:” he stayed behind, sir.” Hady interrupted.

General jones:” well aren’t you going to get him back?”

Sergeant buck:” not till we have your permission, sir.”

General jones:” well you have my blessings.”

Both the sergeant and corporal smiled.

General jones:” well? What are you two waiting for? Your men is out there! Go help him!”

Sergeant buck and corporal hady:” SIR YES, SIR!” and then saluting the general.

General jones:” oh, better equip yourself. You wouldn’t want to lose ammunition while you’re in combat.”

Sergeant buck:” understood sir.”

Both the sergeant and corporal went to the armoury to equip themselves with weapons and ammunition. Meanwhile the general and the private are having a conversation.

Private eve:” sir, do you think it was a good idea to send both of them?”

General jones:” they are perfectly trained men, I’m sure they’ll be fine.”

Private eve:” not that sir.”

General jones:” then? What is there to worry?”

Private eve:” that guy, the one they’re going to save. Is he worth our time and men?”

General jones:” well I don’t know for sure. But no man alive has ever survived a fall that high above ground.”

Private eve:” touché.”

in the armoury, both the sergeant and the corporal are fully equip. the sergeant set up a meeting point, in the garage. Meanwhile in the office building, a few worshipers are scouting the building in search for the armoured man, prophet. Prophet just stayed his ground without making any sudden movements.

In the garage, the sergeant and the corporal finally meet up.

Corporal hady:” woah sir! Is that a new helmet?!”

Sergeant buck:” yep! Standard issue.” The sergeant replied while holding his CQB helmet.

Corporal hady:” man, I would kill to get that operator helmet! Instead, I have a mark v [b] helmet.”

Sergeant buck:” you gotta rank up first, son.”

Corporal hady:” yeah, yeah. so, you ready or not?”

Buck then wore his helmet.

Sergeant buck:” always have been.”

While boarding a carrier, a voice reach out from nowhere.

Private eve:” WAIT!!! I’m coming with you!” she shouted while running towards them.

writer's notes/thanks:

hey, it's a me, mario, no just kidding. its me Farid. so i really liked how this part went even though i changed some parts, that was in the spoilers. uhhh i put in some parts from halo, like the helmets. that is all i can copy from the game,why i wanna put in helmets is because i wanna make it look epic for future chapters.that also means i have to change the look of the prophet. so not that much action but i hope you guys like intensive and epic conversations though. i liked how prophet sacrificed himself to let the others go, made him feel much more special. i'm trying to make the characters believable and make them have a real feel in them. try to make the readers connect with them. i changed my style of writing a bit and i think i'm gonna stick to it. looks better and much more easier to understand. i'm gonna start writing the next part next week, maybe after my N level exams, during that week. part 2 is gonna be more action packed because prophet is going to.........and retirieve the....... well thats all i can tell. so hope you enjoyed reading this, i think it is one of my best works so far. much love to those who liked my previous work.

thanks,

Farid.

Deliver Hope,Chapter 1:The Great Descend

introduction:

Earth, a birth place to the most dreadful species called Humans. Humans have been walking on this Sacred Planet for more than a million years. the early humans were clueless, deluded and naive. but then god send upon them a prophet, one who would guide them to the sacred path of religious beliefs.as they learn the ways of the sacred path, some were influenced by a great evil. they were told that the prophet was a liar and must be rid off! and so, they did as they were told, destroying every single prophet god sent from the heavens to guide them.as time passed, god has given up hope on humans and could only rely on those who has already followed him.as evolution came to pass, more and more humans do not believe in the ways of god.as they think it is a ludicrous thought of believing in something that is not there for them. some had also followed the path of the great evil, they have sacrificed human lives for their own personal gains. the great evil had something in mind for the followers of god, for his worshipers shall slaughter all of gods followers. but gods followers are not going to go down without a fight!

it is the year 2035,a war has been wagging for years, as the worshipers try to annihilate the followers. millions are dying and several thousand injured and a few are left homeless with no where else to go.as god saw this incident, seeing innocent lives taken away, he then tried to send one more HOPE, a final chance for mankind. he who would fall from the heavens shall save us all in times of crisis. he is a soldier who would fight for the gods and his followers shall be saved from the great evil. he is our final hope, gods final hope for humanity.

chapter 1:The Great Descend.

gun shots firing in the air like a parade, grenades being tossed around like paper balls in a classroom but this is no fun and games, this is war.in the fields of fire two followers are discussing over a strategy to flank the enemy.

sergeant buck:" how are we doing soldier?"

corporal hady:"i don't know sir! but it looks like they are starting to be running out of grenades!"

*BOOM!! a grenade exploded just near of their location*

corporal hady:"forget what i said!"

sergeant buck:"DAMN, what are they on?! they don't seem to be running out of ammo!!!"

corporal hady:"probably that asshole the great evil sir!"

sergeant buck:" man we could really use more reinforcements here! they're outnumbering us and out powering us too! if only a miracle would happen!"

corporal hady:"reinforcements? heh! i think they don't even know we're still here! miracle? not by a LONG-SHOT sir."

then something came down to earths atmosphere, a drop pod to be precise.it was falling down a thousand feet above ground. both sides were dumbstruck when they saw the drop pod, as it was not man made designed.is it a friend or foe? as it drew closer to the ground soldiers stop their fire to stare at the abnormal looking pod. then it finally reached earths ground floor, sergeant buck and his fellow corporal were close to it. not wanting to get shot, both the sergeant and the corporal stayed their ground. but the enemy didn't, they slowly went near the pod.it was silver coloured with abnormal patterns surrounding it.it almost looked alien but at the same time it did not. the hatch started to open slowly, with immediate action the enemies surrounding it put up their weapons as they know it is not theirs.as it slowly opens, their eyes were wide open the whole time just waiting for something to pop-up and shoot the thing. while on the other side, the sergeant and the corporal are talking.

corporal hady:"you saw that sir?!"

sergeant buck:" sure as HELL did soldier!"

corporal hady:"you think it's reinforcements?"

sergeant buck:"i thought you said, there ain't gonna be reinforcements? sigh i don't know hady,it didn't look man-made you know."

corporal hady:"wait so, if it is an alien, does that mean we have to fight both them and the those asshole worshipers?!fuck !my life just keeps getting better and BETTER!"

sergeant buck:" not if we make him think that we're his allies."

corporal hady:"i see where this is going sergeant, but will it work?"

sergeant buck:" might as well try."

*sound of a cocking gun*

while the enemies were distracted by the pod, sarge and the corporal had already came up with a plan to flank them.

sargeant buck:" you know what to do now corporal?"

corporal hady:" yeah, but lets go through this again. you want me to throw all of our frag grenades at the enemy and you'll go run at it? sounds like a ridiculous plan sir!"

sergeant buck:" NO! it is an amazing plan if you see it from my point of view."

corporal hady:"sir, what good will running straight at a grenade do?!you'll be bits and pieces!"

sergeant buck:" just do corporal and that’s an ORDER!"

corporal hady:"sigh, yes sir."

sergeant buck:" ok, in the count of 3.3,2,1 NOW!!!"

corporal hady immediately threw his grenades at the direction of the enemy and at the same time the sergeant came out of his hole and ran for his dear life. when the grenade exploded, the enemy had no other reaction but to just turn their heads towards the sound. while distracted, the sergeant immediately took out his rifle and shot every single one of them. the enemy was shocked as it was a simple diversion to get them not to look at him. the enemies on the far side of the battlefield were too far and could not risk their ammunition if they were to miss. the sergeant immediately reached the pod and he was surprised to see what was inside! it was a man in a silver coloured armour with strange patterns surrounding it.it had a gold visor and from the looks of it, he can stand at a staggering 6.5 feet tall.it looked as if it was a future soldier. then the sergeant spoke to himself.

sergeant buck:" what in sam hell is that?!"

on the other side, the corporal took a peek to see the situation and to his surprise, its getting worse. more enemies are coming to see who or what had taken down their comrades. thinking to himself, the corporal then cocks his gun and gave himself a slap for courage and confidence.

corporal hady:"damn you old man! why do you have to do this? now i have to save your ass! GOD DAMMIT!"

the corporal being smart, he threw a rock near a mine, doing that the mine exploded. the enemies were distracted and corporal hady had a great opportunity to do what he wants. he then throws a smoke grenade in the middle of the battlefield, at the same time he ran out of his hole and went straight towards the smoke cloud. while he was in the smoke, the enemies try to open fire, but all of their shots were wasted on thin air. while in prone position, the corporal had a grenade on his left hand, it was a flash grenade to be exact.so he cooked up another distraction, he then throws the flash grenade out of the smoke cloud and everything went clear white. then the corporal stood up and walk out slowly with a pistol on his right hand. he shot down every single one of the enemies. he knew that he would not be affected by the flash as he was in the smoke, a plan well executed indeed.

the sergeant was also blinded, while he could not see a thing all he can hear is the screams of his dying enemies. a few minutes later the effects of blindness wore off and all the sergeant saw was corporal hady with a pistol on his right hand and a piece of cloth covering his face with his left hand. then the sergeant said to him.

sergeant buck:" you sneaky bastard! you had grenades with you all this time! well thank you for saving my ass anyway."

corporal hady:"i had to improvise, besides you are not gonna hog all of the attention of finding this guy all to yourself.so what is he anyway?"

sergeant buck:" why don't you see for yourself."

both of them directed their attention to the armoured man. suddenly a radio broadcast was heard.it said:

"is anyone there, i repeat is anyone there? this is general jones on radio, do you read me?"

after hearing that the sergeant immediately pick up his radio and replied.

sergeant buck:" i read you sir."

general jones:" buck? is that you? i thought we lost you for god sakes!"

sergeant buck:" not yet, sir."

general jones:" is anyone still with you, son?"

sergeant buck:" yes sir, corporal hady is here."

general jones:" alright, I’ll send in evac right away. just wait for a few minutes, will ya?"

sergeant buck:" yes sir."

sergeant buck and corporal hady was relieved that they are going to leave the battlefield, for now. then the sergeant and the corporal started talking.

corporal hady:"so, is it dead?"

sergeant buck:" not sure, life support systems seems to be working but i ain't getting any physical movements. not yet that is."

corporal hady:"huh weird."

sergeant buck:" that’s not the exact word that you should use, son."

then suddenly there was a beeping sound, a reading of the heartbeat. both the sergeant and corporal immediately directed their attention to the pod. then the armoured man started to show some signs of movement, he twitched his fingers a bit.

corporal hady:" woah! did you see THAT?!"

sergeant buck:" sure did corporal."

corporal hady:"is there gonna be enough space in the carrier for all of us?"

sergeant buck:" if not, then we'll have to make space."

the armoured man shook his head and looked at his hand. after that he then grabbed the sides of the pod and lift himself up, he could not stand perfectly as it seems that he was in life support for a long time.it looked around its surroundings and saw two men just in front of it. both the sergeant and corporal looked shocked and ready to shoot it. suddenly the armoured man just ran and took sergeants pistol and fired 2 shots. both the sergeant and the corporal immediately put up their guns and pointed it at him. the armoured man turned his head to their direction and pointed at the thing that he shot with his left hand. what the sergeant and corporal saw was a dead worshiper with an RPG.

corporal hady:"DAMN! that was amazing!

armoured man:" thanks."

both the sergeant and the corporal were dumbstruck at that moment. after that both the sergeant and corporal talked to the armoured man after their freak out.

corporal hady:"so you got a name?"

armoured man:" no"

corporal hady:"then we have to call you something."

sergeant buck:" why not prophet?"

corporal hady:"what? you serious?"

armoured man:" prophet huh? sounds nice.

sergeant buck:" then its settled, nice to meet you prophet."

prophet:" like wise."

corporal hady:"you guys are weird...."

*sound of car tyres rumbling in the distance*

the three of them then saw 2 carriers driving their way.

sergeant buck:" looks like that’s our evac boys."

corporal hady:"finally!"

prophet:"evac? where are we going?"

sergeant buck:" we're going to central base, underground. don't worry I’ll tell them that you're friendly."

*car stops*

driver:" what are you waitin' for ,come on in!"

they all walked over to the carriers and rode on them, the sergeant took the seat beside the driver while both prophet and hady sat behind the cargo area.

driver:" who is that guy?"

sergeant buck:" Hope"

then they drove off to central base.

END OF CHAPTER 1

Writers thanks?:

Hey, its me, farid the writer himself.so I just wanna say, I think the story is starting to put itself together, like the plot and stuff like that. So next chapter will be up next week, i need inspiration and ideas for my work. And if you already notice a bit , the writing suddenly turns sloppy and boring at the end, I’m sorry for that. I somehow got a little confuse, because I was trying to be so good that I ended up failing instead. Maybe next time I shouldn’t try so hard? If I don’t then what’s the point right? If you wanna know who is my inspiration to make this kind of stuff, well his name is Jon Cjg. He’s an awesome guy that makes great machinima’s with great plot and story line. He is responsible for the person I am today. I somehow have something in common with some of his characters in the videos he make. I would really like to thank Jon Cjg for being an awesome writer, screen player, puppeteer, voice actor and all of those other things that he does that makes me feel that he’s so fucking awesome! Excuse my language but seriously, he’s really cool even though he thinks that he’s a loser. Also, I would like to thank my English teachers for teaching me all new crazy words and stuff, so thank you mr hairwan and ms lin for your help and support. And also to my friends who liked my works, love you guys so much, I’m starting to cry, god dammit.

Thanks,

Farid.

still processing,my new series!

hey guys,

been a long time eh? well this is gonna be quick though, um i'm still processing myself right now. starting to clear from the halo fan zone a bit and getting to watch other videos than halo.the other thing is, i'm starting to get into writing now.

i made a new series just for fun and for future use in videos, but if you wanna do something like a machinima, i don't mind. so i'll post it later on another post so you won't have to read it that long, or i'll just direct you to my Facebook profile and you can just read it there. this story is basically a solo work, i'm the director, writer and producer. but i could use some help a bit,like give me suggestions and ideas because i seem to be running out of them or they are just hiding somewhere.

i'm also doing another project but this one is a group work. same thing, writing a story but i'm just the writer this time. my friend/s are responsible for story telling. but seeing the standard of vocabulary they are in right now, i'll basically be the one to help them with the story but not that much though.so look forward to my work and our work because, we just want to tell the world " hey we are awesome guys! even though we are a bunch of NERDS!".

thanks,

Farid.